Angel In Disguise
Posted on : 04-05-2009 | By : Tink | In : Poetry
Tags: June 2009 Contest, Writing Contest Winners
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An angel appeared before him
A figure bathed in light
Golden curls adorned her head
Eyes shining clear and bright
She was a welcome interruption
His life desperate for repair
A gift from God he knew at once
To lead him from despair
Her soul an endless repository
Full of love for the broken boy
His sense of self awakened
Overflowing with sudden joy
Before long her image haunted him
From the darkness a demon lurked
Perception no longer reliable
Convoluted delusions at work
Golden curls slithered and hissed
Eyes shifted from blue to red
The bright light that surrounded her
Transformed to flames instead
To survive he must destroy her
A battle he must not lose
Bury the angel In disguise
Or risk the right to choose
The first blow met with silent pleas
Blood dripping from his hand
He raised his sword and burrowed deep
Convinced of God’s command
A flutter of wings broke the silence
A slight breeze against his skin
To his dismay his opponent rose
And returned to her origin
His transgression fully realized
Noiseless tears began to fall
Mindful of his broken dreams
She was an angel after all
-Tina Krawczyk
I like this poem the best !
Great job Tink :)
I love your style of writing and the variety of words you use! Great Job Tink (:
Once again, i like this poem the best and it’s not just because your my sister …. great job !