War’s Boogeyman

Posted on : 02-03-2010 | By : aaj92 | In : Short Stories

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We’re all familiar with those monsters, the ones that live under our beds, in our closets, and in every dark corner we encounter. Though he wears many masks and carries several names, he’s the same exact idea, a creature that scares the living Hell out of us. The boogeyman is something we’ve nurtured from a very young age. We gave him the tools to scare us, the power to frighten us, and the ability to haunt us at any time. But as we grow up, we lose our vivid imagination skills, which the boogeyman feeds off of. By simply not believing, we’re taking away his energy, leaving him as nothing but a disregarded scrawny creature that will someday cease to exist.
As for us, our boogeyman is rather different. He wears a uniform and carries a gun, he doesn’t hide under the bed, nor in the closet. He appears in plain sight, proud and confident. We’ve known him from a very young age, though he’s not the work of our imaginations. We never gave him any tools to scare us, nor did we grant him the power to frighten us, and we certainly didn’t allow him the ability to haunt our every waking hour. He was forced into our imaginations, I call it “fate’s cruel prank”. “Nature’s ugly joke”, would be a better description. He doesn’t feed off of our vivid imaginations, no, he feeds off of fears. But not ours, those were the fears of the cowards that stood by and let it seep into our homes. Those people that chose to close their eyes and allow this hideous monster to fabricate itself into our minds. No matter how much we grow up, we can never stop believing. We can’t get the idea that at any moment he can barge in pointing his gun at us out of our heads. He would never fade away, he will never cease to exist….

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I think the best one word summary is intresting, but in my opinion that’s just one word that can be used to duck out of finding any more meaningful term. Sorry I don’t have anything better.

War sucks, to be sure, but I can’t tell what in particular the author is talking about. Is the perspective from a civilian in a war zone who is just trying to stay alive, or is it from the point of veiw of a returning soldier who has nightmares and PTSD about battles, or is it talking about the overmilitarization, if that’s a word, of America.

All these topics are good and valid, but I’d like more clarity.

Jaik

I must agree with Jaik here. I get the feeling you’re skirting around the topic, and throughout the piece I was searching for the conclusion I thought you were leading me to. I don’t know if you were afraid of being too opinionated or what, but your readers want a clear conclusion with the main question in the piece answered.
Other than that, wonderful. I believe that if you rework it a little it will be splendid.

Thank you for the comments.

Let me make the piece clearer:

It’s about what children go through when a war is taking place.

Comparisions are made: a child living in a non-occupied country sees the boogeyman as a frightning creature that feeds off of his imagination. He creates himself, but as he grows up, that creature disappears, because he’s too mature to believe in his existence.

As for a child living in a war-torn region, his “boogeyman” is the soldier that frightens him and haunts his dreams. He wasn’t created through his imagination, he doesn’t exist in his country because he allowed him to. No, he exists because others (other countries) didn’t help and stood by while he barged into houses and committed inhumanatarian acts.

He realizes that he will never go away.

I was hoping that readers will be able to see the comparision by reading the two paragraphs.

Anyhow, thank you.

AAJ

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